woow..is very cool 8DDD!!!

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Thanks xD

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hehehe ur welcome C:!!!!

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Your colouring has improved a bit recently, but the colour composition is still... eye-searing? The anatomy needs a lot of work--Axel's arms, in particular, are two totally different sizes. Also, Riku's arms are kinda bending backward and he appears to be missing his right hand. Overall, the shading and anatomy need work.

Shading, anatomy and Colour scheme.

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The one with the purple and silver hair-- one hands seems to be missing and the weapon seems to be coming out from his body. Like the above people have said, color scheme, anatomy, and shading is in need for this picture to come out more better.

1. For this picture, all of them seem to be floating, for the exception of the floaty heads. They do not seem to be on any solid land and just seems you drew around the figures, which didn't come out right.

Anatomy is a big part of your problem, there are too many errors to state for this picture, they're all shapeless, and give off a very 'flat' feeling to it.

Also, the guy in the red hair-- Axus? He seems to have a cape behind him? It looks like it's flowing in the wind, yet, none of the other guys seem to be affected by the wind, including axus himself( except the cape thingy of course)!

Where is the emotions in this picture? What are you trying to convey? They all seem so lifeless to me, and if I remember the term-- they are suffering from uncanny valley! Are they angry? Sad? Happy?

Shading, it seems to be night, where is the light source coming from? Also shade in greyscale to increase your values :].

Coloring the skin is not just color, infact all colors reflect off eachother, some how, some way. The skin would have a very soft tint of blue.

There's more I want to critique but I just can't place my tongue on it. Also excuse my typos =]

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